I’m not sure if I’m seeing your route correctly, but I have a few thoughts. If you are not in good shape I would not recommend trying to cross Ginge Brooke on Ickneild Way. In anything other than (persistently) perfectly dry conditions it becomes so deep in thick sticky mud that it is almost unpassable going Eastwards.
To be honest I’d stick with the published 544 route, it is quiet and actually rather pleasant! Enjoy!